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[Shaz]

Okay, so far, I've done this. Obviously, I will add in camera angle notes and whatnot as we move forward.

Scene 1:
Airport

Phonecall on black screen

Ring Ring

Nik - "Hey, I'm on my way, you know where to meet, don't be late. Look for me on the horizon. A convoy of boxer will approach"

Cue Ramstein Engel

Nik is seen standing outside the airport, with a steel case cuffed to his hand, and dressed in a suit.

<insert dialogue/voice over>

Close up of steel briefcase, locks, and cuffs. Pans out slowly, showing Nik putting briefcase in boot of Subaru. Fade to dark. Sound of Subaru driving off.

Scene 2:
Toll Gates

Camera inside of boot shows boot opening, and briefcase being taken out. Focus on briefcase, and human blurred in background (F3.5 / 1/125) Boot shuts. Black screen.

Camera switches to outside view, of Nik removing briefcase. Crane pans and tilts out to show 2 wagons flanking car briefcase being removed from. Subarus parked around car and bodyguards with NERF guns walking alongside Nik.

GoPro footage Attached to Niks wrist showing briefcase being moved from one boot to another. Walking through crowd of people looking at Nik and bodyguards toward second car. Second car has man standing near boot.

<dialogue between Nik and Car 2 driver (Car 2 driver scruffy looking, loud, gives zero fucks attitude>

Boot opens, and Aek jumps out and runs. Car2 Driver screams at henchmen to get him (Camera close up of car2 driver yelling “Get him!”) Sit on boot of wagon, and drive forward slowly as Aek chases camera, showing 2 bodyguards chasing behind. . Crash tackled by 2 of Car2 drivers henchmen, put on stomach on ground, (Camera on ground on slider, pan from left to right as being duct taped on mouth, and cable tied hands behind back) bound with cable ties and duct tape, and put back in boot of car.(Camera 1 inside boot of car, Camera 2 GoPro attached to Aeks head, multi angle display on screen in final edit)

Nik stands expressionless as he watches this unfold, like this is something he is used to seeing. Car2 Driver hands over cash/bag/suitcase in exchange, and Car2 driver goes back to car. As he stands next to his open driver’s door, he looks around and see’s a mass of Subarus. Nods approvingly, gets into car, and drives off, with convoy in tow.


Scene 3:
Peats Ridge

Boot opens; Aek once again gets out, grabs the suitcase, and makes a run for it. (Camera shows many subarus parked in background. GoPro footage of static Aek head, but scenery around him moves fast and rough, giving a running/dramatic escape effect) Punches someone in the face, gets in their car, and drives off. Subyclub rolls out searching for the rogue car. (Camera of Aeks car parked behind bush, with background shot of other Subarus “searching” for him)

Highway rolling footage of cars.



Scene 4:
Hunter Valley

Car “chase” with Aek (5-10 cars in chase, filmed from back of wagon shooting back. Focus on Aeks car, and rest of cars behind him swerving trying to get in front of him to stop him. Eventually a car blocks the way, and Aek has to stop. Gets out, runs, but gets caught again. Briefcase is confiscated, and taken back to original Car2 guy and Nik @ Harrigans.

[peteRS]

Dudes...we need at new thread for all this...so hard to wade through/catch up/add valid input

[Zac]

Nice... I'm still worried about the swerving rying to get in front of him bit, but meh... LOL! I'm too cautious...

So does Aek get shot when he is finally caught in the end?

Is there going to be a twist ending with the suit cases? Maybe Aek isn't dead, and the case that was confiscated from him was a fake

Dudes...we need at new thread for all this...so hard to wade through/catch up/add valid input

Good point... sorry... then Shaz can just keep updating the OP with the storyline update...

[Shaz]

Maybe he does get shot, and then the case confiscated, but its just has a note inside saying "TROLOLOL"

[Zac]

Maybe he does get shot, and then the case confiscated, but its just has a note inside saying "TROLOLOL"

All this might take focus away from the cruise, but is still fun... lol... his "execution" can be something like clips from COD... groggy Aek sees a blurry gun, and is then shot... then Nik gets the case, opens it, and sees the note.. and yells NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! LOL!

Think we should listen to Pete and start a new thread for this... would be easier on all of us... lol!

[Shaz]

I'm not sure we should open the script up to people yet though. Thats my only concern.

[Zac]

I'm not sure we should open the script up to people yet though. Thats my only concern.

Ha ok then... thats cool... its looking pretty good to me so far... it will be epic, will show off your film work and editing skills..

[Shaz]

Its going to be a MASSIVE challenge for me.

I've never done this before, so I'm hoping I can get it to turn out half as good as what its sounding.

[skillionaire]

Nik stands expressionless as he watches this unfold, like this is something he is used to seeing.

Oh geez, it's going to take me ages to get into character.

[Samwise]

the cruise, we're making a movie bitches!

[Shaz]

Oh geez, it's going to take me ages to get into character.

There is going to be SO MANY BLOOPERS at the end of it.

[Zac]

Its going to be a MASSIVE challenge for me.

I've never done this before, so I'm hoping I can get it to turn out half as good as what its sounding.

Lol! here to help with little things if I can.. no editing or filming knowledge, but I do know scripts and some movie stuff... I can come up with ideas...

[Samwise]

Oh geez, it's going to take me ages to get into character.

I thought this was your natural state.

[Zac]

Oh geez, it's going to take me ages to get into character.

And.... done

the cruise, we're making a movie bitches!

Hellz yeah!

[B4TT]

Hahahhaa Nik.


The downside to making a new thread for this will be that I won't get to see what you are planning

[peteRS]

Its going to be a MASSIVE challenge for me.

I've never done this before, so I'm hoping I can get it to turn out half as good as what its sounding.

It's easier that having raw footage and trying to shape something out of that, trust me . But yes, it will be Eipc.
I really think that you either need to go it alone "Director/editor' wise, or throw up a 'purely ideas only' suggestion thread, that you sift through and decide what takes your fancy the most, then story board it all when you are happy.

[Harry88]

Awesome thread is awesome.

Just had a mate look at my desktop pc to see what broke. Turns out it was a power supply and motherboard that went. So that means I will be building a new pc when I have the monies.

[B4TT]

^^ Good idea Pete

Also,

[peteRS]

We need video conferencing on SubyClub.

[Shaz]

Alright, I will bang up a thread.